Lucia held her breath. If she let the paint dry and the canvas framed, nothing would move again. The garden that burned with vibrant greens and crimson violets would stop its sway. Whizzing dragon-flies and fluttering birds would halt mid-flight. Sun and moon would forestall their billion-year cycle. Life continued so long as her brush continued she thought. However, this was a mistake. She recalled a nugget of wisdom. “An artist should know when the work is complete but not before. Too early and the painting will feel wanting. Too late and the painting will do too much.” As these questions nagged at Lucia, her husband in the distance announced that lunch was ready. Lucia’s vision faded and the memory of her late grandmother and her final words evaporated into thin air. The painting was done.
Sep22
Beautiful story with a bit of wisdom from her grandmother. I could vision your scene very clearly. A wonderful story – and thank you for participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge. 🙂
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Thanks! Was a pleasure participating.
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Lovely story, I could see it clearly.
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Wise words indeed. They apply to many forms of art including writing so I’ll shut up!
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Very interesting story. I liked her grandmother’s wisdom.:)
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Thanks! I was reminded of famous artworks like the Mona Lisa which took da Vinci a life-time to refine.
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I really liked this! The end line made me smile 🙂
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Glad that you liked it. The best times are when painting finishes itself.
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