Jeremiah had many guises. In past lives, he had been a sorcerer, assassin, mystic, warlord, and baron. His pact with the Krovikian Order gave him eternal life but at a steep cost. Beneath the temple lie a vast catacomb of phylacteries that housed the faithful’s souls. Such bonds tied Jeremiah to the syndicate for millennia until his latest reincarnation. Fortunately, the purification process had failed to eradicate his fledgling vessel’s soul which remarkably started re-coalescing through sheer force-of-will. Katarina was its self-name and he would use her to break both his imprisonment and the Order’s grip on the world.
Nov13
Great world building here.
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What a great opening for a fantastic story! More coming?
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Maybe. Another photo prompt will come along to give some inspiration.
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You packed a lot of story into your 100 words. I liked ‘phylacteries’, too – I don’t think I’ve ever seen the word used in fiction before!
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I first heard it used in games as a storage place to trap souls and to gain immortal life by preventing its transmigration.
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Jeremiah is continuing her life through several incarnations. If he has survived so long and remembers his legacy, one day for sure he will conquer and dominate the world order.
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Nice read
Strange
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One man’s quest to save the world from the grips of the Order. I suspect there will be an ugly scene.
Great piece of fantasy writing and world building.
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Yep, he’ll need to undo what he helped build over millennia.
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