Clarice stood steadfast, closed-eyed, by the edge of the stone road.
To her right, the community that had raised and trained her for these many long years parted. She reminisced the times spent within buried halls and lost archives, learning the secrets of the dark arts. They would aid her on this day when the red tides rescind and the artery reopens. She would leave and let past turn to resolve against the struggle that must transpire.
To her left, the stony road cut straight, shooting through landscapes and seasons, space and time. She traversed this road once before, but out of fear and escape from the organization that murdered her family. Now, she would traverse this same road that led inexorably back to the waking world and finish the deed set long ago beneath the burning rubble of her childhood village.
Clarice opened her eyes and woke up in a hospital. Five years had passed since she fell into the coma. The time for running had come to an end.
This is wonderful! It is her awakening from a coma. Very creative!
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So… was it all a dream, or was she in the coma specifically so that she could go to this mystical place and learn the dark arts, and now she’s coming back to this world to avenge something? I’m rooting for the latter. 😉
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She survived the massacre but was left in a coma. There she spent five years training within the underworld, aruguably a heros journey onto itself, before allowed to return to the waking world to exact a revenge.
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Oh good! Well, not so good for her, I guess. But better than the “it was all just a dream” trope for the rest of us. This answer makes for much better story!
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I’m guessing the people who destroyed her village are in a spot of trouble now. This reminds me a bit of what’s her face in “Kill Bill” 🙂
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My thoughts exactly. After I finished this, I realized that the coma ending sounded like the start of a certain Tarantino movie. Maybe this would turn into a prequel 😉
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I love the imagery of the road and her finally returning to the waking world. I’m left really wanting to see what comes next.
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Yep, the road will be long and arduous, dark and murderous. By the end, she may not even realize what she’d become, caught within an endless cycle of vengeance.
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Wow, that is neat. Most of the story was her in a coma, then she wakes up. Great take on the prompt.
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Brilliant! I wonder what her story was? How her family got killed. Good mystery.
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