Avalon’s gardens held a unique attraction. Every fall, the old caretaker would hang lanterns filled to the brim with delicious seeds, grains, and nuts. Birds of all varieties would take a detour from their annual migration to visit Avalon and enjoy the respite. Such had been the case for generations that they eventually referred to the garden as paradise, the land of bounty, song, and rest.
One season however, the lanterns turned empty. The caretaker, in old age and poor health, was bed-ridden and had fallen into a deep coma. Sensing the time was near, the birds one by one perched on top the lanterns to mourn the caretaker’s passing. Some recounted the time they first met their loved ones within the garden cloisters. Others spoke of distant homes and their long journeys to the outer terrace. Those who had personally met the caretaker hummed a requiem into the night. Alas, when no more chirps could be uttered and further lamentations spent, the caretaker took a final breath, grinned, and then vanished.
From that day onward, the lanterns of Avalon would be everflowing.
This is a nice fairy tale, and I like how you make the death of the caretaker a beautiful event rather than just sad.
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Thanks. His legacy like the memories he instilled will continue to live.
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Love the idea of the birds mourning together and recounting tales to each other. Well done.
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That gave me goosebumps. As Miss Zebra and Iain say, the passing as a beautiful thing, and the birds all being together in their mourning, holding a vigil and then a wake is a gorgeous story.
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Poignant yet somehow beautiful. Beautifully written
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Love the fairy tale feel to this one – what a lovely image, the ever-overflowing bird feeders!
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I enjoyed this a great deal. Legend, from th birds point of view. Love how the old caretaker disappears and seeds are always overflowing.
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