“Fortune rewards those who wait.
Beware those who tempt fate.”
“Why would someone nail a plaque to the underside of a park bench?” Jimmy wondered after reading the inscription. He had spotted the message after discovering a shiny silver dollar half-mixed with the wood-chips near his feet. “Must be my lucky day then” he chuckled while pocketing the coin and taking his leave.
The next day, Jimmy returned to the park bench and discovered a hundred-dollar bill half-concealed near the same vicinity from yesterday. Suspicious of a trap, he bid his time idling for a full ten minutes whilst checking his surroundings. When the coast seemed clear, he quickly scooped up the auspicious find and left without incident.
On the third day, Jimmy once again returned to park bench. To his disbelief, a giant gold nugget lay half-excavated in the same place as before; a blind man could practically see it from afar. More suspicious than ever now, he took up residence near some playground equipment and watched. Other people who passed the bench appeared oblivious. Those who sat down and left did not suddenly die. Jimmy waited and waited till the sun finally set before making his move. He took to his knees to begin digging but as soon as his finger tickled the nugget, the ground beneath him opened up and within a second swallowed him full! A single silver dollar then spat out from the ground followed by a deep rumble that sounded like a “burp”.
Oh my gosh, he should have taken the advice of the sign! He got greedy. That’s where all the silver dollars are coming from – the remains of the people that are being eaten. This is horror and creepy good!
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Yep. The evolved venus fly-trap has learned to prey on humans with shiny nuggets.
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Great story! Very creative and unique!
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Uh-oh, the dangers of tempting fate indeed!
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Yep. Fate grew some teeth this time. No more second chances 😉
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This story reads like a Brother Grimm tale to me. I guess that’s what one gets for being greedy. Very creative take on the prompt and well told.
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Thanks. This story was actually inspired by the movie “the big short” and the current situation with the inflated market resembling 2008. Greed wasn’t punished enough after that debacle.
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I have never heard of that movie but it sounds interesting. I’ll have to check it out.
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Oooh, love the fantasy twist here! Such a creative take on the prompt! Poor Jimmy, should not have been greedy.
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The supernatural forces had even warned Jimmy beforehand but he just couldn’t resist.
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Ha, I love this!
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Appreciated!
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Looks like he wasn’t quite cautious enough!
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He should of waited longer 😉
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Oh my, he shouldn’t have been taking the money. Maybe waited a long while for fortune to reward him. Interesting story.
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He wasn’t patient enough. All the other passerbys knew the game was on beforehand.
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Greatly enjoyed! A deep belly giggle from me after the burp!
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